Thursday, April 10, 2008

The World and Love

Poem #5

The world will never know
How quickly love can grow
between two very different souls
It doesnt matter if were here or there
because love is in the air

Your spirit is everyday
inside and out, through all the changes
we stood at the crossroads and staired
in each others eyes
like we was in outer space

I used simile and personification

2 comments:

G. Latman said...

You need to let me know what poetry devices you have used and in what lines they occurred. Do this at the bottom of the poem.

G. Latman said...

What line has a simile and what line has personification?